This is so upsetting. But I will try to overlook my emotions and give a coherant review. *sniff*
This is a very original concept, and well done. The idea about darkness being timeless... it's funny, because a friend of mine and I, just messing around with role play, wrote out a scene with Sora and Riku on the dark beach based on that idea, that time just didn't exist. So I sorta smiled when I saw that idea in your drabble :) Otherwise, I like the simplicity of your descriptions, and the last paragraph...geez...just killed me.
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*freaks out and runs away*
This is so upsetting. But I will try to overlook my emotions and give a coherant review. *sniff*
This is a very original concept, and well done. The idea about darkness being timeless... it's funny, because a friend of mine and I, just messing around with role play, wrote out a scene with Sora and Riku on the dark beach based on that idea, that time just didn't exist. So I sorta smiled when I saw that idea in your drabble :) Otherwise, I like the simplicity of your descriptions, and the last paragraph...geez...just killed me.