ext_187854 ([identity profile] lorei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble 2007-02-12 03:01 am (UTC)

Oooh, awesome characterization! I love how you wrote him--

Ienzo had spent the last five years crafting his façade. Being pretty had its advantages. No one could distrust him, because he seemed so reasonable, so polite, a logical and shy man. But the truth was he just liked to see things fall apart. It was terribly good fun.

Excellent, that whole paragraph! (Also and off-topic, icon love ♥)

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