ext_187854 ([identity profile] lorei.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble 2007-02-18 02:32 am (UTC)

You are...oh you're absolutely amazing.

Ummm- world choice! Snow White is excellent. I love how unsure Riku is, there, just before he kisses her. Because, he is just a kid and of course he doesn't know what to do, and that then seeing her being so..fragile..he feels guilty for it. The characterization there is perfect, perfect! And, I really like his observing her eye color, little details like that make me happy.

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