ext_134689 ([identity profile] lindskaba.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble 2008-12-25 10:13 pm (UTC)

Christmas comments for everyone!!! ♥

[livejournal.com profile] taistoi: What an interesting idea! I love the idea that the Organization is blackmailing all the major nations in the world, and also that Obama wouldn't stand for it. Lexaeus' final comment to Obama is fabulous.

[livejournal.com profile] lorei: I love your characterization of Demyx. It's always great when he's written as he should be: dark and manipulative. I also love your final line.

[livejournal.com profile] spoke: "The heart you could have swayed, Princess." -- awesome awesome awesome.

[livejournal.com profile] yo_yo_san: Oh geez. You do write this trio well. Her skin would surely taste of cream and honey and library dust, and her tears would be as lovely as the blood-stained fingers of dawn. - beautiful. And I love the last line. It echoes. Lovely job.

[livejournal.com profile] syvia: Oh, I do love puppetmaster!Axel, and you write him so well here. I love his answer to Namine's question: "This is what I do." Fab.

[livejournal.com profile] singwithin: I love the idea that Riku is searching for Namine inside of Kairi. It's a beautiful way to combine two pairings. Axel/Jasmine is fabulous; one of my secret delights, and you write their interaction very nicely.

[livejournal.com profile] fated_bliss: Namine playing with the die is so sweet, and Luxord's reaction to it is so in character. Lovely job.

[livejournal.com profile] tunasaladsonnet: Ahhh! This is great! Olette's fear is so palpable, and I love the bookended sentences at the beginning and the end. Olette wanting to be like Tifa is...awesome. GREAT job.

[livejournal.com profile] str1: Haahahah! What can I even say about this? It's adorable and funny and perfect. I love it.

[livejournal.com profile] iki_teru: I love both of them (even though I'm never been a fan of LeonxYuffie as a pairing), but I especially love the second one. Aerith's feelings of worthlessness replaced by a feeling that made her laugh til she cried is lovely. I also like how you wove them together so nicely.

[livejournal.com profile] dreamer1789: I LOVE Luxord hitting on Tifa XD So cute! And Luxord hooking up with the replica, asking him, "Are you feeling lucky?" Pretty hot.

Overall I am really enjoying these! Wonderful job everyone! More reviews for the second batch later...

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