taistoi: What an interesting idea! I love the idea that the Organization is blackmailing all the major nations in the world, and also that Obama wouldn't stand for it. Lexaeus' final comment to Obama is fabulous.
lorei: I love your characterization of Demyx. It's always great when he's written as he should be: dark and manipulative. I also love your final line.
spoke: "The heart you could have swayed, Princess." -- awesome awesome awesome.
yo_yo_san: Oh geez. You do write this trio well. Her skin would surely taste of cream and honey and library dust, and her tears would be as lovely as the blood-stained fingers of dawn. - beautiful. And I love the last line. It echoes. Lovely job.
syvia: Oh, I do love puppetmaster!Axel, and you write him so well here. I love his answer to Namine's question: "This is what I do." Fab.
singwithin: I love the idea that Riku is searching for Namine inside of Kairi. It's a beautiful way to combine two pairings. Axel/Jasmine is fabulous; one of my secret delights, and you write their interaction very nicely.
fated_bliss: Namine playing with the die is so sweet, and Luxord's reaction to it is so in character. Lovely job.
tunasaladsonnet: Ahhh! This is great! Olette's fear is so palpable, and I love the bookended sentences at the beginning and the end. Olette wanting to be like Tifa is...awesome. GREAT job.
str1: Haahahah! What can I even say about this? It's adorable and funny and perfect. I love it.
iki_teru: I love both of them (even though I'm never been a fan of LeonxYuffie as a pairing), but I especially love the second one. Aerith's feelings of worthlessness replaced by a feeling that made her laugh til she cried is lovely. I also like how you wove them together so nicely.
dreamer1789: I LOVE Luxord hitting on Tifa XD So cute! And Luxord hooking up with the replica, asking him, "Are you feeling lucky?" Pretty hot.
Overall I am really enjoying these! Wonderful job everyone! More reviews for the second batch later...
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Overall I am really enjoying these! Wonderful job everyone! More reviews for the second batch later...