ext_66872 ([identity profile] dreamer1789.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble 2010-09-28 12:55 pm (UTC)

Another crisp combo of sweet/sad. I really like how you hint at these moments in terms of description, leave the very fine detail for the reader to sketch out - it gives it that memory-vagueness, imo. ^^
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