the way the world ends

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Challenge: None
Title: The Way the World Ends
Word Count: 100
Characters: Riku, Sora
Notes: For the theme 'fear' at key_blade.
Spoilers: None



He watches the darkness eat them up from both sides, and he stares and blinks against it, helpless, not knowing what to do. He feels guilty and scared and panicked all of the sudden, and he fears the dark, fears what’s going to happen to them and what might come after this.

He reaches forward, offering him his hand. If they’re together, he knows that he won’t be afraid.

Their hands don’t touch, and the darkness suffocates him, and he can only think of one thing in all of the confusion:

This is the way the world ends, isn’t it?

Comments

[jaesprite.livejournal.com]

=o I like how this seems at first to be going in a hopeful direction, like they'll take each other's hands and be all right and all that, but then it turns right around and gets dark again.

I especially like your voice from Their hands don't touch on; I like how one thing is linked to another, almost as if being suffocated is a direct result of their hands missing each other. Pretty. ^^

[ruby-shards.livejournal.com]

♥ Thank you so much for you nice comment. I'm glad you liked it. :D