the way the world ends

[ruby-shards.livejournal.com]

Challenge: None
Title: The Way the World Ends
Word Count: 100
Characters: Riku, Sora
Notes: For the theme 'fear' at key_blade.
Spoilers: None



He watches the darkness eat them up from both sides, and he stares and blinks against it, helpless, not knowing what to do. He feels guilty and scared and panicked all of the sudden, and he fears the dark, fears what’s going to happen to them and what might come after this.

He reaches forward, offering him his hand. If they’re together, he knows that he won’t be afraid.

Their hands don’t touch, and the darkness suffocates him, and he can only think of one thing in all of the confusion:

This is the way the world ends, isn’t it?

Comments

[gysecune.livejournal.com]

I liked this a lot. In such a small amount of words, my emotions went from one feeling to another. The last line really conveyed an overwhelming sense of hopelessness to me, and I thought it was the perfect ending for this.

And on another note, I love that song by Franz Ferdinand. :D

[ruby-shards.livejournal.com]

♥ Thank you! I'm glad you liked it - I was trying to fit all of what Riku may have been feeling at that one time into such a small piece of writing, and I'm surprised, yet happy, that I managed to pull it off so well.

XD It makes me smile.