Challenge Post

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Challenge: [066] Rhyme
Title: Quiet Truths
Word Count: 81
Spoilers: Vague KHII spoilers.
Rating: G
Notes: Six rhyming haiku. Yes, haiku aren't meant to rhyme. But they can.


Roxas:
he'll never be whole
memory is the essence
of the human soul


Axel:
he was never told
hope is mankind's cruelest gift
he learned that alone


Riku:
more than a blindfold
he is beholden to none
if he can't behold


Sora:
he'll never be free
there is work yet to be done
in bearing the Key


Kairi:
sanctuary, whole
at last, she can't help but smile
it's been a long while


Naminé:
her chance at parole
she and he are trapped in chains
only one remains

Comments

[kunoichi-life.livejournal.com]

not only are you doing haikus, you're making them rhyme as well. It's madness!!

Short, but they're right at the heart of the characters. =D I love em'

[emptybackpack.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I love the medium of haiku.