ext_66841 ([identity profile] tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2006-11-02 10:24 pm
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Challenge: [081] Trick or Treat
Title: Aftertaste
Word Count: 100 (YAY)
Notes: No spoilers. Larxene/Namine, noncon. I'm no good at fluff.



She claws her hand forward, wrist twisting. Papers scatter and splay, crunching under her feet and smudging the colours with each boot-print. Little witch all alone. No incantation to save her from gloved fingers that cup her cheek, press her hip, slither along her thigh.

A sharp whine from frozen lips. She sips it like rich wine and spits it back in the child's face.

"Stop."

"Say please."

"Please."

"No."

That is her trick.

The sob that follows, tight and broken and fragile and sickly sweet on her tongue, guides her hands beautifully. That sob, well.

That is her treat.

[identity profile] lazzchan.livejournal.com 2006-11-03 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
...

dear gods....

That is SUCH a Larxene move...

o_O

XD Good job!

[identity profile] euphonious-glow.livejournal.com 2006-11-05 01:29 pm (UTC)(link)
*shivers* That is really creepy, and an interesting use of the theme. I knew it was Larxene right away, but... wow. I like how we're given just enough, just a little taste of what's happening.

[identity profile] jaesprite.livejournal.com 2006-11-07 03:41 am (UTC)(link)


So good. I was wondering how to use the theme, twist it and turn it dark like that, and this is perfect.

And yay 100 words. :D