[Feedback Post]

[wrong.livejournal.com]

To commemorate the 100th challenge at kh_drabble (as well as all sorts of other things), we'll be having this nifty thing called the Feedback Post. Basically, this is a cumulative feedback post, where people (both signed in and anonymous) can give feedback to any author. Basically, in order to participate in it, all you need to be is an author who has posted in this community before (because it's a feedback post, duh.)

For Those Who Want Feedback
1. Put your username down in the comments.
2. It is up to you, but I think it would be helpful if you put links to your latest drabbles. It is up to you, of course.
3. Do enable comment notification, because anonymous comments will be screened.
4. Do feedback to others too, especially if you like receiving your own feedback!

For Those Who Are Giving Feedback
1. Basically, general comments on their writing style, ideas, creativity? I know all of us here are authors, or at the very least, readers, so we do have an idea of what writing is like and how someone can improve. Even better, tell someone their positive points, because we all need a little ego boost now and then.
2. Slanderous reviews will be deleted. Just because it is anonymous doesn't mean that you can shoot your mouth any way you like. If people take advantage of it then anonymous reviewing will be turned off.

I hope that this would be useful and constructive to the participants of this community, but most of all, really fun as well.

So get to it!

(Oh, and if anyone wants to use this to feedback to the moderators about anything in the community, I suppose this is a good time as any to do so. Thanks.)

Comments

[lorei.livejournal.com]

This is an interesting idea...I'll offer feedback myself, a bit later when I've got more time :D

eighty-five (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/403626.html)
eight-six (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/409456.html)
ninety-seven (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/474580.html)

[lazzchan.livejournal.com]

85 is really interesting, because it gives a (very disturbing) image of what life is like when you're an adult. That you go to school, then you work and marry and die-- it's frightfully accurate and I can see Riku not wanting to accept the same standard as everyone else. Very good insight to his character and why he did the things he did. You really good at writing character pieces themselves, even if sometimes there are small errors here and there.

86 has a lovely discordant feel, where you're not sure who is what and what's going on, but it just works for the piece. Again, your writing style is amazing for catching an image. Never very long, but just a lot packed into it.

97 was wonderfully original. =D Poor Sora! But it was a sort of 'breaking the 4th wall' without being so horribly obvious about it. Great images here and a lovely poke into what could have been going through Sora's head. *laughs* Video game character indeed!