ext_61121 ([identity profile] musexmoirai.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2007-04-30 01:12 am
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Challenge: [103] Desire
Title: Schoolgirl
Word Count: 286
Notes: Spoilers for Re: CoM. Warning for High School AU. Emphasis on the AU.

He was the most popular boy in the class and her heart fluttered whenever he smiled at her. It was impossible not to love him, she told herself, for his heart was as wide as the sky he was named for. Everyone, even surly silver-haired Riku, smiled in Sora’s presence.

She fingered the yellow star-shaped eraser on her desk, the one he had left for her. Heat suffused her cheeks and she wanted to hide her face. She felt incredibly foolish.

“He really likes you,” Kairi’s warm breath tickled her ear as the other girl leaned forward to whisper, her clever hands still expertly twining blonde hair into a braid.

"Are you okay with that?" she whispered back. "I know you... and he..."

Kairi waved a hand, airily dismissive. "Childhood crushes, you know how those are. But what he feels for you... that's real." Her eyes sparkled with an impish light. "Come over to my house after school and we'll get you a new outfit. I bet Sora'd notice."

Her heart thumped wildly in her chest. She threaded her fingers with Kairi's, seeking reassurance, and felt a gentle squeeze in response. It made her smile, and gave her courage enough to sneak a glance at Sora.

He was looking at her, his smile wide and his eyes blue as - a very blue crayon smear on white paper.

Her hands were shaking; she couldn't hold her colors steady.

The acrid smell of electricity was in the air and Namine hurriedly shoved this picture back under the other ones. Larxene could mock and taunt and draw blood with words sharp as her knives. She would make Namine cry, but never over this.

Not this silly girlish dream.

[identity profile] syvia.livejournal.com 2007-04-30 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww. ^^

I'm usually wary of High School AU- but that's a fabulous twist at the end.

*applauds you* :D

[identity profile] dilly-spandle.livejournal.com 2007-05-01 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Gah, that's so sad. :S Neat use of the AU concept, too. I think Namine seems like she would engage in exactly that sort of escapism.

[identity profile] dilly-spandle.livejournal.com 2007-05-01 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
x3 Glad I could help.

[identity profile] tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
!!! I'm not used to being taken by surprise by drabbles. And high school fic is really not my thing, but eieee. I love what you've done with this. Absolutely love. Namine clearly needs snuggles. Lots and lots of them.