ext_66956 ([identity profile] syvia.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2008-04-01 12:23 am
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Challenge Post

Challenge: [142] Destiny
Title: Star-Crossed Something-Or-Others
Word Count: 320
Spoilers: Slight for CoM and KH2
Rating/Warnings: PG, none really
Notes: Axel has kidnapped Kairi. He likes to hear himself talk.



"It's your own fault, yanno."

The girl looked up from her study of the uneven ground, eyes wide and- ah-hah, that might have been a hint of anger.

"What?" She tripped over something. He grabbed her arm, dragged her upward and let go so quickly she almost fell against him.

"Careful there," he mocked. "Gotta watch where you're walking." She jerked away, but didn't try to run. She'd learned earlier that it didn't really work. Axel raised his eyebrows and started walking again. "I mean really, living in a place called Destiny Islands? You were asking for this kind of thing to happen."

She laughed, low and fake. He could tell. He had lots of experience with fake.

"Oh yeah," she muttered. "That's right. I asked to be kidnapped- I asked for my friends to go off and run around other worlds- I-"

"Tsk tsk, Kairi. You can't wallow in self-pity like that. It'll keep you from moving on with your life." He thought he could hear her growling back there. He might have liked her if... yanno. It was a shame, really.

"You do believe in destiny, right?"

She went silent, the only sound the crunch of their shoes over fallen leaves.

"Yes," she decided. "I do."

"Yeah," Axel returned. "So do I." He paused to choose the next path, caught the surprise in her expression. "I mean- I don't honestly think surviving a Heartless invasion," he kept walking, "meeting Roxas, surviving Castle Oblivion, and evading the Organization this long has been luck."

"No gloating about how it was skill?"

He grinned. "Pride's an emotion."

Kairi looked at him, sighed wearily and shook her head. She moved past him, trudging along the path. "Does this destiny of yours involve getting a Keyblade shoved up your butt?" she asked over her shoulder. "I'd call that luck."

Axel stared, decided to chuckle. No doubt about it.

He would have liked her.

[identity profile] masakomoonshade.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
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I gotta say, AxelKairi is my favorite not-true-but-I-wish-it-was ship. And you've pretty much summed up all the reasons why. Luvly. You have their personalities just right.
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[personal profile] fox_the_kitsune 2008-04-01 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
He would be capable of actually pissing her off. XD This gives me bad plot bunnies, by the way.

[identity profile] dreamer1789.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 11:52 am (UTC)(link)
:D Ah, the joys of annoyance.

"No gloating about how it was skill?"
He grinned. "Pride's an emotion."
I love how he says that, but it's very sad. ^^

[identity profile] tea-berry.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I adore these characterizations. Absolutely perfect.

:D

[identity profile] euphonious-glow.livejournal.com 2008-04-05 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very nice. The Axel I write doesn't believe in fate, but I can easily see him being written either way.

His interaction with Kairi was one of my favorite parts of the game, mostly because I saw so much more of his COM personality in those scenes. Selfish, sly, and a little mysterious.

Very nicely done.