ext_284775 ([identity profile] punjab-banks.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2009-02-23 10:40 pm
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challenge: [178] passion
title: bloodshot
wordcount: 307
notes: (i used to be [livejournal.com profile] lorei. sup yall) there's a creeper in the traverse town hotel, who else found him? i'm very curious as to what he looks like :( if he looks like anything at all.


I own the hotel of Traverse Town. I decorated it myself, way back in...well, that's none of your business. Before the darkness came, will that do you?

Red Room Green Room

Isn't the juxtaposition of European and Asian styles intriguing? I thought you'd say that.

Blue Room Yellow Room

You can't go in there, sir, it's for paying customers only. All you ever do is run in and out of here, anyway. What do you need the real fine rooms for?

There's the art, of course.

I chose the entire collection, you know. Postcards of paintings and paintings of the worlds. I like the view of Bald Mountain the best, myself.

Never been there myself, of course. I like the desk, though I wish I could sit out. I used to have a real nice face, sir. Now? Oh, well, I had that face before the darkness came. I haven't been out since then.

No, I'm not a coward; what if they ruined the hotel while I was away? You drag enough of them in. You and your loud friends and dangerous sharp weapons. Those grunts cause enough damage; imagine if the real dark darkness came out here? I have a hotel to protect... and I'll keep this place around, bet on it. Leave it? Oh God, no! Even if all the rest of Traverse Town falls (and I don't doubt it, you hear about those poor little dogs? Probably look worse then I do by now! Hah!), it's hotel, it's best tourist attraction, my home, and I will "Always be here."

"Goofy," Sora hissed, as Donald burned the rest of the Heartless down. "Ya hear that? I thought I heard a - whisper? But there's no one there!"

"No," Goofy said, jovially. "But I do see a pair of eyes, sorta floating. They're all bloodshot, like they've been awake for a while."

[identity profile] oreo-81369-17.livejournal.com 2009-02-24 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
ox0 goooodness gracious~!! creeeeeepy~!!

is there really a thing like that in there~!?
ohh man i gotta go play the first game haha

[identity profile] oreo-81369-17.livejournal.com 2009-02-26 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
hahah dooode of all the times ive played it i haven't ever seen it~!! ahhaha *cries* aww one of my friends is borrowing it hahah thats so crazy

[identity profile] de-yaten.livejournal.com 2009-02-24 05:15 am (UTC)(link)
nnnn~~

Your fic is so creepy. I love you that.

[identity profile] greedchan.livejournal.com 2009-02-24 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I WANT TO MEET THAT GUY. xDDD
That's great.
I love when people explore characters who aren't named.
I wanna know what he looks like, too!
Or maybe it's a chick?
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (✩bad hair day)

[personal profile] admiral 2009-02-25 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
I think I love you.

[identity profile] hotasphyxiation.livejournal.com 2009-02-26 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Haha this is awesome! Creepy, sorta sad and kinda funny all at the same time. ;P Also, I do not remember this from the first game, but if I ever play it again I will be sure to hunt down these so-called floating eyes...

[identity profile] spoke.livejournal.com 2009-02-27 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't remember any eyes!

I do remember beating the heck out of that bell, mostly because I felt like pestering whomever-it-is.

Now I feel as if that wasn't the best idea. ^^;

[identity profile] tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com 2009-03-02 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
Nice! I like how you played the prompt out, I like the voice and tone, and I like the word juxtaposition. (Plus the initial bizarre factor that makes me want to throw KH in and check this out, heh.)

[identity profile] euphonious-glow.livejournal.com 2009-03-02 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Very cool! The ending was creepy and cool. I love obscure characters/situations, and I had always wondered about that hotel...