ext_352123 ([identity profile] greedchan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2009-04-03 12:19 am
Entry tags:

(no subject)

Theme: [182] Puzzle
Title: Everyone is Always Connected
Wordcount: 150
Summary: The pieces wait for their place.

---

Everything is a puzzle, scattered by memories and relationships and being.

She sits in a chamber of white, grasping the pieces one at a time.

A tale of skies and hearts and friends is placed down in its proper home, and nearby the dark clicks in beside it with blinded eyes and hurt in his soul. Directly beneath the dark is light, full of smiles and the scent of home. She watches as the puzzle, the story, it all unfolds, and she herself is there too, empty white and false longing. Thirteen non-hearts beside hers, all identical and all different.

Dark hearts and the light of love coincide in the middle and explode into a jigsaw of relationships. Her hand stills and the puzzle fills itself in. It doesn't need her influence anymore. It's fine on its own, just like the people it has replaced.

She smiles. This means hope.

[identity profile] oreo-81369-17.livejournal.com 2009-04-03 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
aw~!! no waiii haha this was so cool~ i love the...third part with the darkness and stuff~ cooool♥♥
ext_218012: (Default)

[identity profile] iki-teru.livejournal.com 2009-04-03 12:33 pm (UTC)(link)
8O.....
*speechless* *in a good way*
ext_218012: (Default)

[identity profile] iki-teru.livejournal.com 2009-04-04 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
PFFT. I've been writing for this comm for like three YEARS and have yet to put out anything nearly this epicly beautiful. *cuddles you in hopes of your talent rubbing off*
ext_114030: i'll chase you. to the sun and the moon and back again. i won't stop. (Default)

[identity profile] roterhimmel.livejournal.com 2009-04-03 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
This is really, really nice.

[identity profile] kawaiigami.livejournal.com 2009-04-05 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Ooo, nicely done. XD *snugs Nami* And hey, we wrote about the same character.

[identity profile] hotasphyxiation.livejournal.com 2009-04-07 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Namine!fic is the greatest, especially when it's as lovely as this. Really nice- I love the short and sweet aspect of this as well as the whole puzzle analogy. Wonderful piece! :)