ext_370045 ([identity profile] killer-rip.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2009-06-10 03:02 pm
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[189] Poker Face

Challenge: [189] Poker Face
Title: Changes
Word Count: 29
Characters: Axel and Roxas
Notes: Short, I know. Pathetic, I know.


Axel can make a lightning-fast transition between fiery emotion-filled phoenix and dead-headed reptile. Roxas is both admiring and frightened by these rapid changes to his friend.
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[identity profile] darklight90.livejournal.com 2009-06-24 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Next time, try inserting these in a longer passage please :)

[identity profile] killer-rip.livejournal.com 2009-06-24 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes... XD
Thanks for the critique.
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