http://yaoibanshee.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yaoibanshee.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kh_drabble2005-01-19 12:20 pm
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challenge: brightest
title: photographs
word count: 216
notes: this came out kind of weird, style wise, and the title basically turned into one big extended metaphor, but yeah... >.O



They say the heart is where we hold the people closest to us. Our most precious and most cherished memories, carefully kept and stored away where we'll always be sure to find them.

But even the brightest memories can begin to fade. One day you dust them off to find the colors washed away, and the faces are no longer those of the people you once knew. Frozen for an instant, trapped in time; they don't look different, but somehow, they've changed. And you know that you can never go back.

~~~

It wasn't hard to see; everyone had noticed it. Anyone who had known him at all, however briefly - all of them could tell. They could see the way his smile had dimmed, how his laughter had become rough and worn around the edges. And they couldn't help but feel the way his eyes seemed to look right through them, how that gentle blue had become cold and far away - much too old for the eyes of one so young.

What had returned to them was not Sora - Sora was gone. He was completely lost to them now, and probably always would be.

But this boy who looked like him and talked like him... This boy was nothing more than a memory.


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[identity profile] moontear.livejournal.com 2005-01-19 12:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. That was really... chill-bump material. I love it. <3

[identity profile] shadowedsolace.livejournal.com 2005-01-19 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*shivers* Ooh, that was good... I loved it, and the style was appropriate.

[identity profile] april-14th.livejournal.com 2005-01-19 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it. Very metaphorical indeed, but in a good way =]

[identity profile] lostpanda.livejournal.com 2005-01-19 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved it. Almost brought a tear to me eyes arrg. Very well written. ^///^

[identity profile] lostpanda.livejournal.com 2005-01-21 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
>.< I can't help it! <.< ... >.> *joins in happy dance* wheee

[identity profile] purple-angel01.livejournal.com 2005-01-19 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
That was good. Thanks for writing it.

[identity profile] ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com 2005-01-20 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
I love how you use the idea of the a memory being a photograph, and the changing of their personality and!and!and-- I won't even bother to try to explain, but I love it! :D

<33

[identity profile] ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com 2005-01-20 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Is that a good thing or a bad thing? (sounding like you, that is? :D)

[identity profile] snarechan.livejournal.com 2005-01-20 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Nothing but a memory...it leaves such an empty feeling, a cold piece of ice embedded in my gut as I picture this cold, new Sora.

Interesting, and very deep. <3

[identity profile] cute-death.livejournal.com 2005-01-21 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
*snaps* like, wow man... that really speaks to me. (im just kidding. it's really very well done! short, but awesome. a good novel starter!)

Re: ....

[identity profile] cute-death.livejournal.com 2005-01-24 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
that was a compliment.... the snap part was stereotyping the poetry reading, and they snap instead of clap... i dunno... it just sounded like something in one of them thar fancy artful reading type thigns,.... but i really liked it! sorry...

[identity profile] cute-death.livejournal.com 2005-01-24 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
that's it.. imma make me a ansem plushie.. and maybe it wil be a bakpack as well.... and it will rule the world...