Fic, KH, "Broken"

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Challenge: Breaking
Title: Broken
Author: Kat aka happyegg
Word count: 279
Rating: R-NC-17
Warnings: LEMON, NON-CON, DISTURBING. You have been warned.
Notes: I left the pairing a bit vague, but I'm hoping people can figure it out.



Dark hands ghost across pale skin, caresses making the underlying muscles ripple and tense. He can see his shirt where it was thrown to the corner, bright yellow a harsh contrast against the overwhelming black.

“What are you do-“

“Shh.” The hands are moving lower, fingers undoing buckles and buttons and pushing everything down and off. Then suddenly he’s on his stomach, though an arm around his middle stops his face from hitting the pillow.

“Stop it... I’m warning you.” The words are barely audible, whispered desperately though he knows its too late.

A chuckle, and he feels something move against him. He barely has time to inhale before his breathe is stolen, pain as something presses in catching his lungs in an iron hold. Then the invading motion stops and he can breathe again, though the oxygen rush is not enough to make him forget the pain.

A soft cry. “Sora.”

“Sora.” A pause. “The Keyblade Master is much too far away to hear you. Far away, and safe for the moment.”

Breath hitches, hope dances behind eyelids squeezed tight in agony. “Safe.”

“Yes, safe. Unlike you, who are damned beyond any hope of salvation.” He grits his teeth at the mockery he hears, though the truth in the words bites harder then the tone.

Then movement, harder this time, tearing further bloodied flesh. Screams rent empty air, callous grunts and harsh panting in their wake. The end is marked by a loud moan, the following silence broken only by half-smothered sobs.

His voice is shaking when he finds the strength to speak again. “You’ll never break me.”

A knowing smirk. “Yes, I will.”

He gives no reply.

***

*Shudders* I never write non-con, nevermind lemons. I'm sorry to anyone who was offended or squicked, but I did warn you.

Crossposted to kh_drabble and khyaoi

Comments

[seleraleonhart.livejournal.com]

Uhm.. *bites her lip* ..Axel and Riku?

[uzumakisama.livejournal.com]

Ansem and Riku! I loved it, it was so sexy! creepy and dark and so very evil~ I liked the use of the challenge, too -- lovely, lovely writing~

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

It was written as Ansem and Riku, but I guess Axel could work. I wouldn't describe Axel as having "dark" or tan skin though.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Whee! *Bells go off* You guessed it! And thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Dark and evil is damn fun to write, but afterwards I always feel so guilty o_O

[luvlustblood.livejournal.com]

I had to think a moment...But eventually I guessed Ansem Riku...W/out looking at the comments, seriously!!!

That was very good, and it was dark and evil, but dont feel bad. That stuff coulda happened, they just dont put that stuff in E rated Video Games.

Nice job!

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Yay! Congrats to you too then. I like leaving the reader a little guesswork, but sometimes I know I'm too vague with my descriptions.

Thanks. I still feel guilty and horrible for hurting Riku, but in conveying a dark mood someone is going to end up suffering. They don't put a lot of stuff in E rated video games, but that's what writing fanfiction is for.

Thanks again, and glad you enjoyed.

[yaoibanshee.livejournal.com]

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Permanent? Poor Riku ;_;

Thanks. I like to think of Riku as having a bit of an invincibility complex. No one could ever beat him before, so he's used to coming out on top (pun? What pun?). When he finds out Ansem can beat him, despite loathing Ansem initially for the obvious, he also respects the man deeply. */rant*

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Whew. I put all the good clues in the first paragraph, so I'm glad someone picked up on them so quickly. Don't worry, a lot of people like non-con. I'm not one of them (which is weird, given that I wrote the thing), but the Ansem/Riku overall relationship is so damn appealing. Glad you liked it.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Yep, I agree. Riku needs someone who's his equal, or at least presents a challenge, which is why I think he's always pressuring Sora to get stronger. Then along comes Ansem, who dominates him liek woah, and Riku admires his power immensely.

Then yes, he realizes what evil!Ansem's power is doing to his friends, and thus we get the love/hate thing. Fanfiction is wonderful for filling up those little gaps ^.^

Thanks, I try XD

[riku-glomper.livejournal.com]

bwaha i also knew that it was ansem n' riku from the first sentance XD those dark hands and pale skin told meh. and hey your not a horrible person, i too lurve teh ansem/riku non-con action n_n. or that just makes us both horrible >

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

*walks into a wall* Damn! It's so dark in here!
eheheh...sorry about the stupid pun. I'm not a fan of non con but I liked this, very well written.
Oh and happyegg were you in a Muraki sorta mood when you wrote this? =D

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

*Claps* The dark hands, pale skin and yellow shirt were about all I gave ya. Go you for picking the clues up!

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Despite all evidence to the countrary, I wasn't in a Muraki sorta mood at all. I'd had a horrible dream the night before where terrible things were happening and I was completely powerless, which inspired the mood for this. It was more written with Riku's point of view in mind then Ansem's.

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

Ah I see. x.x It's amazing as to what dreams can inspire you to write.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Yep. It was a good guess though. Nothing says "Muraki" like pedophilic rape o_O

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

Indeed 0.o
A friend of mine drew a chibi Muraki with a rose and bloody knife for my birthday last year, she then proceeded to put it up on my ceiling above my bed.
So now I get to wake up to lil pedophilic Muraki every morning. >.> I'm to lazy to take it down.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Wow, waking up to Muraki's smiling face every morning... what an interesting way to start the day XD

[purple-angel01.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was wonderful. And by that I mean dark and angsty...a great drabble^_^.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Thanks ^.^ Glad you liked it.

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

Yeah, and it's the kinda smile that says "I'm going to smile all cute like so you don't think I'll rape and or kill you in your sleep, you delicious little thing you." or something like that. Maybe I'll take a picture of it and show it to you sometime. >.>

[orisghost.livejournal.com]

Very dark, deep, and well done. I don't think anyone would really be offended by it, since you put the information there, but it wasn't vulgar at all. Poor Riku... Glad I didn't take a chance at reading these drabbles in CG class though... That could've landed me with a lot of explaining to do...

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Thank ya! Non-con is a very touchy subject with some people, so I just wanted to make sure people knew what they were going to be reading. I'm happy you liked it.

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

wait, so the tearing was like his ass?

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

... yes, to put it bluntly. Told ya it was weird.

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

nah, I'm fine with it. but yeah ow that would hurt....sometimes I wanna be raped (in the butt of course, I'm a boy), but not actually get you know, real physical damage (like a hueg gash for example)

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

*Whew* Glad it didn't bother ya too much. But yeah, I know, major ouch >.< The trick would be finding a rapist who cared enough to prepare you correctly, but I have a strong feeling those are in short supply. Maybe you and your future lover can role-play it... ?

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

yah...sometimes I wanna be gangraped...

the funny thing is though, I am SUCH an obvious bottom, but I like younger boys usually.......huge crushes. the boy I like right now is a junior (I am a senior) but he looks like he's 12! he's very cute, I talked with him after school alone for like 45 minutes the other day........crush.....I am definitely planning him to be one of the people I play in a band with this year, I haven't been in a band since my old band broke up....he actually plays bass and he has a wonderful voice (I am a vocalist as well, I am baritone/countertenor, he is a hightenor with no falsetto but a connected headvoice, it's very rare).....so I hope that works too.

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

but yeah point being what the eff because there is no way he can dominate me!

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Like I said, as long as they're gentle gangrapists.

Nyaha, an obvious submissive ^.^ I find that terribly cute. But yeah, good luck with your little boyfriend and the band. And who knows, he could be secretly very dominating. It's the element of suprise that makes it fun ^.~

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

you know what...I like you...let's be friends, maybe...?

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

and yes he is VERY CUTE

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Sure, I'll add ya. Just beware my spastic posts ^.^

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

don't worry, actually I'd be more worried about you...I randomly write like, holy shit long entries.teeheehee.

by the way, I just found this today, I figured you could benefit from it as well, someone put up ALL of the gravi remixes (basically really erotic yaoi version of gravitation, except for 00 which is hetero) here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/velvetdreams/379923.html), so check it out if you want it.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

Awesome. I'm sure I'll survive, I've gotten used to only one person on my flist using lj-cuts at any given time.

*Explodes from joy* I've been looking for those all over. Right, I officially love you now. Thanks so much!

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

aww, thanks! yah, I had to look for a while too. by the way the warnings:

00 - already told you this but this is hetero, meaning shuichi has boobs. it's strange...and I don't get off on it, I dunno if you do.

11 - this is ROUGH. 10's pretty rough too but this one's the worst, none of the other ones are bad like this, the bottom's forced two dicks, a dick piercing and even drinking his own pee. it's NASTY.

[happyegg.livejournal.com]

'Welcome. Like I said, you're so awesome for finding them!

... wait. Shuichi + boobs = wtf o_O Thanks for the warning, I think I'll save myself the harddrive space.

Ouch. 11 sounds painful and squicky. Thanks again, you just save me at least five years of future therapy.

[summonillusion.livejournal.com]

yeah, I saw 11 back when I used to be more affecrted by this kind of stuff, and it was nasty.

[eternal-moonie.livejournal.com]

At first I thought it was Kairi who was being touched, but then I realized it was Riku.

Nice drabble. I've got exactly the same thing though.

I HATE writing non-con/rape, but when you have an idea (and that one idea I just wrote today in my character journal plagued me for months!) it wants to be written.