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Challenge: [197] Second Chance
Word count: 109
Title: Character Developement
Notes: I know, I know. I'm a horrible person. I go, Ooh! Happy sounds good! No more angst for a bit! and what do I write? Angst. sorry.

We can take you places you've never dreamed of...
Silence. A voice, young and sure of itself.
"No thanks."

“Riku, wanna come to the island with me?”
“No.”
“Pleeeeeeese?”
“How many times do I have to say it? No. You’re 18. Act your age.”
Sneering- “Go play with Kairi or something.
A hint of tears. “She- she said to come back when I understand. What did she mean?”
Cruel. “Your dear Kairi meant that she wants you to go away until you stop pretending we’re the same,”
The squeak of shoes on linoleum and a few heartless words tossed condescendingly over a shoulder-
“Grow up, Sora.”

Date: 2009-08-14 01:46 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] iki-teru.livejournal.com
Silence. A voice, young and sure of itself.
"No thanks."

that part made me giggle. alot...

I really like the concept behind this piece =) good job!

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