I like the Alice one, too. (I can't cay anything about the Namine one, 'cause I've never played CoM.) Childhood crushes are cute~ I like the characterization in that one and the Jack one. My only suggestion is that with "Sora." The girl began "the" should actually not be capitalized, and the period after "Sora" should be a comma.
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Date: 2005-10-27 01:15 pm (UTC)