Leon's favorites just happened to consist of pants and people. XD Love that line. This drabble is so hilarious and cute. :D
Only suggestions: Everything about him was beautiful to to ends This is a really pretty line, but you accidentally repeated "to." Also, donning means to put something on, not to already be wearing it.
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Date: 2005-11-29 03:17 pm (UTC)Only suggestions: Everything about him was beautiful to to ends This is a really pretty line, but you accidentally repeated "to." Also, donning means to put something on, not to already be wearing it.