Your wording here is just so so pretty. Most notably in the 'I look into the sublunar...' paragraph, each sentence slides into the next, and it reads with a very urgent, desperate, CRAZY tone. The sophisticated vocabulary reflects DiZ (who despite being a little off, was brilliant) very cleverly. Just... very nice, seriously. The wording for this must have taken forever.
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2006-11-19 08:45 pm (UTC)