You can't hear it right now, but I'M SCREAMING ON THE INSIDE.
I absolutely MUST have the rest of this fic. I must, I must, I must, because if this excerpt is any indication, it will be STUNNING. I don't care if the rest isn't done yet; I will beta-read it for you as you write it, or whatever else you want. Feed me excerpt-scraps, I do not care.
Your characterization of teenage awkwardness and the trio's feel of we are so screwed and Mickey's wonderful, perfectly-on-the-spot paternal amusement creates a marvelously endearing scene. There are a few punctuation errors, and wistful doesn't take an h, but besides those tiny things--I am in love with this piece.
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Date: 2007-03-14 02:19 pm (UTC)I absolutely MUST have the rest of this fic. I must, I must, I must, because if this excerpt is any indication, it will be STUNNING. I don't care if the rest isn't done yet; I will beta-read it for you as you write it, or whatever else you want. Feed me excerpt-scraps, I do not care.
Your characterization of teenage awkwardness and the trio's feel of we are so screwed and Mickey's wonderful, perfectly-on-the-spot paternal amusement creates a marvelously endearing scene. There are a few punctuation errors, and wistful doesn't take an h, but besides those tiny things--I am in love with this piece.
Bravo! =D *applauds* Very original.