So that the idea doesn't fall flat on its nose. XD
I really liked how you can say a lot of things in very few words, which shows in your entries. It makes the story feel very tight and very focused, which is always a good thing.
I do think that your entry for [100] is not as good though, mainly because you probably felt constrained by the word limit, so you opted to go dialogue-only. Your attempt for dialogue is weaker, I feel, and it doesn't read as good as the other two drabbles that you put up.
I also went back to see your first few posts in the community, and I'm actually quite surprised to see how much your writing has changed? You mentioned that you are primarily an artist before a writer, but you definitely have a better grasp of description than you did at the beginning. (Your first entry was a little too...wordy and frilly for me, at least).
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Re: sweeeeeeeeeet
Date: 2007-03-31 09:42 am (UTC)I really liked how you can say a lot of things in very few words, which shows in your entries. It makes the story feel very tight and very focused, which is always a good thing.
I do think that your entry for [100] is not as good though, mainly because you probably felt constrained by the word limit, so you opted to go dialogue-only. Your attempt for dialogue is weaker, I feel, and it doesn't read as good as the other two drabbles that you put up.
I also went back to see your first few posts in the community, and I'm actually quite surprised to see how much your writing has changed? You mentioned that you are primarily an artist before a writer, but you definitely have a better grasp of description than you did at the beginning. (Your first entry was a little too...wordy and frilly for me, at least).