Challenge 193

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Challenge: [193] Destruction
Title: Just One Chance
Word Count: 47
Other: Don't tell me I'm too late! D: Randomly typed up, and I've been out of fandom for a while. Hope you like!

Riku has a choice: allow thousands of causalities and destroy hundreds of worlds in order for a chance to have an adventure, or stay safe at home with his best friends and family.

As his world goes up in flames, Riku can barely contain his smile.

Comments

[careforpears.livejournal.com]

Pretty much sums up the reason I both loved and wanted to slap him across the face throughout KH. Very nice. <3

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! Agreeing so hard core here. I mean, I could understand why Riku wanted to get away, but still wanted to SCREAM at him for letting such a thing hapen for such a selfish reason.

Thanks!

♥

[killer-rip.livejournal.com]

Wow. I hadn't really though about him like this before, and it fits.

[hotasphyxiation.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure Riku knew exactly what he was doing when he started that whole mess but this really makes you wonder, regardless. I like it. Really cool take on the challenge. The timing and execution of this is perfect, too.

[roterhimmel.livejournal.com]

Like this a lot -- as with all things Riku, it makes me cry and smile.

And this is why you are one of my favorite KH writers

[heartspocky.livejournal.com]

This really fits him, haha. He's such a shortsighted dummy but I love him so ;o; Great job... I have to say I really admire anyone who can fit so much thought and feeling in so few words. :)

[tunasaladsonnet.livejournal.com]

...Damn you're good. Only two sentences but volumes are being said about Riku's motivation, and I gotta love that. ♥

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :D

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I was really freaking out a bit because I usually lean more towards way to descriptive, and this was a bit of a challenge, but I'm glad it worked. :DD

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading! :D

Re: And this is why you are one of my favorite KH writers

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

;~; Your subjject thing made me tear up. No, really. <333

But he is! He's so ...so freaking human in that aspect and that's why I love him. And thanks -- usually I ramble on to get my point, so picking every words carefully this time was kind of difficult. Glad it worked, though! :D

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Why, thank you. :D Usually I ramble, but glad to see this attempt worked out well. ♥