[identity profile] crystalreport.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kh_drabble
Challenge: [196] Fifty Words
Title: Inevitable
Word Count: 38
Notes: If you guess who it is, I’ll give you a cookie. I’m just afraid I’ve made it so ambiguous it could apply to anyone…

He stares at the star-laden sky, childishly hoping that one day he’ll be as bright and important as them, if not more.

Little does he know that his fate only leads him to where the stars don’t shine. 
 
By the way, I've never received a banner for my winning submission for the "Conflict" drabble contest. Is the banner maker still here?

Date: 2009-08-07 02:16 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] iki-teru.livejournal.com
I'm not even going to attempt to guess, I always fail the guessing game.
BUT. It's beautiful in the fact that it is fairly ambiguous (not in a bad way at all, I think you're giving the readers more freedom the picture who they want)

Date: 2009-08-07 05:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frostfromfire.livejournal.com
Beautiful... I love the contrast you use between his dreams and the reality of what his fate actually is. Is it... Riku?

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Date: 2009-08-12 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimsoncookie.livejournal.com
it's an excellent question. they always poof during the summer? i'll be posting a roll call with today's poll.

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