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Challenge [196]: Fifty Words (second entry)
Title: Electricityscape
Word Count: 50
Notes: Namine and Larxene's speaking habits. Warning for Larxene being herself?


When Axel or Marluxia are around, Larxene never stops: sugar-sweet and sneering, and bitter, so bitter.

When they're gone, Namine only hears boots scuffing; a coat dragging; the slick, cool sound of metal and the tell-tale whisper of skin on skin.

Larxene isn't one to mince words. Not with her.

Comments

[iki-teru.livejournal.com]

You know, I don't really like Larxene (it may have something to do with the fact that I have yet to beat her) but this, this was lovely.
Damn you for that xDD

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

I totally got my brother to beat her for me XD I have a weird sort of affection for Larxene, and I have no idea why.

Thanks for reading!

[punjab-banks.livejournal.com]

your larxene is the nastiest one ever, and i love her :) especially here; i love larxene and namine's dynamic as you wrote it. (i also like your title! it's fun to say out loud.)

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

What can I say, I can't help but love the bad guy. Thank you!

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

You've somehow made me warm up to Larxene a bit (which is weird because she's still being mean...lol). I have to say, I love this piece. It's wonderful!

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

My love for Larxene is contagious and deadly XD Thanks for reading!

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

[syn-or-fantasy.livejournal.com]

This is simply amazing. Incredibly beautiful in a twisted way.

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[demoerin.livejournal.com]

o-ouch. That's an excellent little portrait you've painted of the relationship, and of Larxene.

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading!