This is all there is. This is all she wants. YES. Oh my god, that is perfect, perfect Larxene. It's my head canon that she doesn't really care about getting her heart back, truth be told, she just enjoys killing, which makes her terrifying, and it gives her a weird kind of innocence--she has no allies or motives, she does what pleases her, and what pleases her is hurting.
I like how you incorporated Xaldin's composure and self-awareness into this, it makes his part so much eerier. Like maybe being one of the contributors to your downfall gives you the insight to know what you're doing is wrong, but not the power to correct it?
Demyx's passivity is what makes him creepy, I think. I am so much more disturbed by his complete nonchalance than I am by Larxene's bloodlust, because she has to value death as at least an accomplishment on her part, or else she wouldn't enjoy it so much, whereas Demyx doesn't even blink. Guhhh.
Sorry for the spazzy comment, this fic just hit all the right buttons <3
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Date: 2009-11-09 03:08 am (UTC)I like how you incorporated Xaldin's composure and self-awareness into this, it makes his part so much eerier. Like maybe being one of the contributors to your downfall gives you the insight to know what you're doing is wrong, but not the power to correct it?
Demyx's passivity is what makes him creepy, I think. I am so much more disturbed by his complete nonchalance than I am by Larxene's bloodlust, because she has to value death as at least an accomplishment on her part, or else she wouldn't enjoy it so much, whereas Demyx doesn't even blink. Guhhh.
Sorry for the spazzy comment, this fic just hit all the right buttons <3