[identity profile] surestsmile.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kh_drabble
challenge; [41] Secrets
title; Honest Mistake
word count; 170
notes; None

She realizes that she has missed her time twice, looking at the crossed out numbers and red circles, her hands whiter than the paper she's gripping. Tentatively, she moves one palm down to caress her belly, wondering, wondering. A sudden desperation and elation seizes her, tears at her.

She remembers him smiling at her, pulling her close and breathing in her scent, kissing her and she makes no attempt to push him away, laughing instead. He echoes her, and it's a strange harmony that rings in her ears now, even in memory.

She wonders if it's a mistake. But it's been two months, and she's always been regular, always, and who would have thought that even as the dead they could create life.

Even as nobodies...and she certainly wasn't one now. Not with this growing inside her. This lovely, hideous secret.

“Larxene? Is there something the matter?”

She turns around, and it's Marluxia who's looking at her with those eyes, and all of a sudden she doesn't know whether she should laugh or cry.

Date: 2005-11-06 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dejablue7.livejournal.com
Wow. This was certainly...different. But interesting. I liked it. Especially considering, I've always been partial to Marluxia/Larxene ^^.

Date: 2005-11-08 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dejablue7.livejournal.com
I should have known, after all of those Marluxia/Namine pieces you did. Well, either way, it was a nicely written drabble.

Date: 2005-11-06 11:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uzumakisama.livejournal.com
XD whoa, I love the twisted concept of a "nobody" having a life growing inside of her. Very nice~ ♥ And a really creative take on the challenge!

Date: 2005-11-06 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spirityouko.livejournal.com
Praise Square, a straight Larxene and an emotional drabble about her.. YOU ARE LOVE! LOVE LOVE LOVE!

I adore this idea.. oh yes, it's sick on some levels but so, so interesting *evil grin* You have to wonder what would have happened..

Date: 2005-11-09 11:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evandura.livejournal.com
That was fantastic, and certainly different. I really liked it.

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