My Entry

[topazeyes.livejournal.com]

Title: Oath
Challenge: [45] Oath
Word Count: 198
Notes: This is really about no one particular pair, although it was intended for Aerith's POV about/to Cloud, but you can look at it from whatever perspective you want. I also intended to be a song I sang for my band, but it fit so well with the challenge, I couldn't resist! ^_^

I cry, hoping somehow you can hear me from wherever you are now. I'm remembering a promise you made to me one cold stormy night while I remained safe and warm in your arms. You left me on my doorstep with your essences on my lips, and now all that lingers is bitter and dry, and I'm still alone.

So can you hear me now that I'm gone? Do you even hear the wind at night? Can you remember the rain and sealing it all away with a kiss? Did you even love me at all?

Torn to nothing, I'm forver broken. I thought you were the one who could save me, but the one that listens, the one that cares, the one who gave a damn, I didn't find in you.

You're a little too late, and to our surprise, I don't care, because I'm gone, and the wind doesn't carry my tears anymore. I'm glad you came back to fulfill an oath we made so long ago, when we were still young, and while you may still love me, I can't love you.

I'm not sorry, and I'm finally happy, so let me go, and let me be free.

Comments

[shadow-dust.livejournal.com]

Awwww Prity! It makes me wanna cry.... T.T In a way it kinda makes me think of Riku and Sora... Yes... feel the yaoi....>> But that could just be the Riku muse in the back of my head cuddling his Sora plushie.. >

[topazeyes.livejournal.com]

I originally thought of Sora and Riku too, but since I'm an uber fan of the Final Fantasy cameo's in here, it seems to be a theme I've created for myuslef ot write about it all the time . . . I dunno, maybr I'm just wierd . . .

[shadow-dust.livejournal.com]

Lol, oh god.. watch it become my theam to do Ansem/kitty stories..>> What a reputation....

[topazeyes.livejournal.com]

Kay I just realized how many typos were in that last comment.

Well, that would lead to some questions, I'm sure . . .

[shadow-dust.livejournal.com]

Sorry about that, when I'm in a rush to type I have bad typos (I had to put that on my lj lookup ><)

[topazeyes.livejournal.com]

Oh I didn't mean yours! I meant mine! LOL!

[shadow-dust.livejournal.com]

OH, lol, well mines bad anyways so just have that as future warning.. lol XP

[topazeyes.livejournal.com]

LOL! XP

[meiko-matsui.livejournal.com]

Awh! That ws so sad! T_T Wonderful job.

[topazeyes.livejournal.com]

Really?! Thank you!