This story is so funny because the opening could potentially be the opening to a pretty silly sort of story about a love triangle between Sora, Kairi and Riku.
Intentionally so. ^^
The dialogue that you use works so well for both scenarios. You do a good job of camouflaging youractual agenda.
Thanks!
The melodramatic nature of the choice in Sora's head even works well for the character beause he is pretty silly.
XD True.
You are very good at capturing the voice patterns of the separate characters in such a short piece.
Thanks. I keep working on it. I feel like I get a little better in every piece.
Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice, detailed comment. =)
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Date: 2006-03-09 01:03 pm (UTC)Intentionally so. ^^
The dialogue that you use works so well for both scenarios. You do a good job of camouflaging youractual agenda.
Thanks!
The melodramatic nature of the choice in Sora's head even works well for the character beause he is pretty silly.
XD True.
You are very good at capturing the voice patterns of the separate characters in such a short piece.
Thanks. I keep working on it. I feel like I get a little better in every piece.
Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice, detailed comment. =)