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I feel greedy, posting two stories for one challenge, but I really wanted to post this, since it was the first thing that came into my head when I saw the challenge.

Challenge: Breaking
Title: “Falling Apart”
Word Count: 162
Notes: Riku’s POV, set after Riku and Sora’s first meeting in Traverse Town. Italics are parts of Sora’s dialogue taken from the game.



I'm not afraid of the darkness. Through the darkest of shadows, I had held onto this image, that I would find you, and Kairi as well. Or maybe you’d be the one to find me. But I wasn’t expecting-

You’re coming with us, right?

That’s when it all fell apart, when the image was broken. Those were your new friends, Sora?

We’d always had a connection, hadn’t we? I’d known that once we found each other, everything would be okay. I believed that.

But what’s this? Keyblade master? Sora, what did you imagine that this would be like? Cause at that moment I felt a wall between us. That connection was breaking and I felt we were being pulled in two different directions.

There was such light coming from you then. But, I had to get away…and you didn’t come after me. It’s not that I found you didn’t need me…it’s just that you…

Oh, well.

You left me there to break.


A/N: So…what did people think of this? I’m not entirely happy with it, as in, I knew what I was trying to say, but I’m not sure it came out right…

Comments

[purple-angel01.livejournal.com]

Yeah, that part of the game made me so sad. Still, if he'd been all like, "NO Riku come back!!" it would have just been more encouragement for us Riku/Sora fans, and I don't think we need any more...

Glad you liked the story ^_^.

Um...did I just break the new rules by discussing the game? *hides*