i'm new here and thought i would post this. it isn't much really...
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Title: She Drew
Word Count:142
Every day she drew on those walls. She made a story for them; a future that would not exist.
She drew adventures they would partake on this tiny island. She drew what they would do day to day.
She drew how things would change and yet not; how they would be the same yet different.
As she drew; she wished. Wished for their safe return to her.
And on one day; as she drew them all smiling and laughing; she knew it was time.
One stood galiantly on the beach; his clothes tattered; eyes darker. His body held scars that did not belong.
The other stood; almost ashamed in the shadows. His face covered with a black cloth; his hair matted and dirty.
They all stood in silence.
She did not know what to say; because this was not what she drew.
it's a tad weird... xDD
challenge: none
Title: She Drew
Word Count:142
Every day she drew on those walls. She made a story for them; a future that would not exist.
She drew adventures they would partake on this tiny island. She drew what they would do day to day.
She drew how things would change and yet not; how they would be the same yet different.
As she drew; she wished. Wished for their safe return to her.
And on one day; as she drew them all smiling and laughing; she knew it was time.
One stood galiantly on the beach; his clothes tattered; eyes darker. His body held scars that did not belong.
The other stood; almost ashamed in the shadows. His face covered with a black cloth; his hair matted and dirty.
They all stood in silence.
She did not know what to say; because this was not what she drew.
it's a tad weird... xDD
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Date: 2005-01-09 11:48 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-01-09 01:16 pm (UTC)but i don't know if I conveyed that very well o____O