Angels In the Snow

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Challenge: Winter
Title: Angels In the Snow
Word Count: 205


They struggled to leave their mark as they frantically moved their legs up and down. The white snow had just begun to gently place itself on the ground- hurriedly, as if its purpose was to keep the children happy.

Kairi got up and shook her head, letting the flakes delicately fall off from her hair. "Riku!" she began, looking at her friend who stood against the tree, analysing the fallen snow, purposely avoiding them. "Don't you wanna make angels with us?"

He folded his arms and raised his chin. "No. Angels are for babies. And I'm a grown man, so I'll just watch you two babies play."

Kairi giggled and pointed at him. "You're only one year older than me! So that makes you a baby, too!"

"No it doesn't!"

"Yes it does!"

Riku ran toward the two and jumped on Sora, interrupting him from his game. "Sora's the baby!"

Sora pushed Riku off and rubbed his eyes. "No, I’m not!" He lightly rubbed his pink nose that had begun to slightly sting. "I’m not a baby!"

Kairi and Riku looked at each other, and then back at Sora. And, in unison, they pounced on him and chanted together.

"Baby, baby! Sora is a baby!"

Comments

[wrong.livejournal.com]

XD That's so cute.

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

*3* That was so cute. "Baby, baby! Sora is a baby!" *3* Poor wittle Sora being called a baby.

[ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com]

That made me want to hug him. Damn... I want a Sora plushie now.

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

Curse you. Now I want one. >.>

[ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com]

I'd curse Sora, but I want his babies plushie, so I can't. Know where to get some? ^^;

[lostpanda.livejournal.com]

-.- Not a clue. ;3;

[fightfair.livejournal.com]

Ah, so innocently cute! *_* These fics that bring readers back to when things were so simple really strike a chord.

[ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com]

Spank you >.> I was actually trying to juxtapose their innocence to what they go through in the game. And when they call Sora the 'baby' is meant to go against the fact that he's the hero- innocence in a baby; innocence in Sora.

Ok. I oficially suck at explaining things.

(And fixing typos, as you might have noticed with the amount of times I redid this comment ^^;)

[fightfair.livejournal.com]

xD Yes. Three times, and I was all, "uh, what?"

I think you explained it well. <3

[ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com]

<33 A heart! ;-;

[yaoibanshee.livejournal.com]

[ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com]

It's a piece of writing. It's whatever you want it to be :)

[prettywar.livejournal.com]

Heh, that was so cute. I love the title, how it refers to their snow angels and also to them (I think...!). And Kairi and Riku both turning against Sora together. :D

Gah, I love Tori Amos. Winter <3

Yeeees to the title thingy :D You were correctio.

[ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com]

*goes insane* I luff Tori Amos ;_; She's so amazing >.<