[identity profile] ichbinfishstick.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kh_drabble
Challenge: Brightest
Title: Sleeping stars
Word Count: 181
Notes: Sorry if it sounds incoherent in places; I’ve shamelessly rushed this <3



His fingernails continually scraped against the concrete ground, sending addictive shivers up his spine.

"Where are you?" he whispered as he searched the sky for hope.

"What you looking for?"

Sora, slightly startled by Leon's voice, politely smiled. "Where are the stars tonight?"

"The stars? You can't see them. At least, not tonight you can't." Leon made himself comfortable next to the boy. "Why?"

"Because," Sora murmured, "someone once told me that if I look for the brightest star, I'd be able to see the person who I'm missing. Where I came from, stars showered every night, but I didn't need to look for the brightest one because she was there, with me, by my side." He rubbed his eye and softly laughed. "The day that I'm so far away from her is the day that the stars fell asleep..."

Leon began to look at the sky, too. Despite knowing that it was a hopeless quest, he still felt as if he had to help. "What's her name?"

"Huh?"

"The girl you’re looking for. What's her name?"

Sora smiled, weakly. "Mom."

Date: 2005-01-18 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wrong.livejournal.com
*squeeeee*

I wuv you. *is teary*

Date: 2005-01-18 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shining-heart.livejournal.com
how squishy *twas not quite what self expected xDD* and it's soooooooo sweet!!!

Date: 2005-01-18 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarechan.livejournal.com
Now that was cute, in a tear-jerking-omfg-brilliant way. It's always somewhat surprised me that parents are like...never mentioned, and I think only heard once in the game. XD;

Date: 2005-01-18 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] everything.livejournal.com
This brightened my afternoon, so to speak. XD Real sweet.

Date: 2005-01-18 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] april-14th.livejournal.com
aww cute! I thought it was going to be Kairi, but then when he said mom I awwed out loud.
To cute =]

Date: 2005-01-19 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] april-14th.livejournal.com
Nah not lame at all because he really seems like the kind of person to be a momma's boy XD

Date: 2005-01-19 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] happyegg.livejournal.com
*WibbleSqueeDie*

Oh. My. GOD. That was so incredibly cute ;_; I was bracing myself for "Kairi" or possibly even "Selphie" but... Mom? So cute!

Not incoherent at all, wonderfully written and sweet and... *meltage* You have so made my day.

Date: 2005-01-19 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostpanda.livejournal.com
That was so cute. ;3; brilliant! I was also bracing myself for "Kairi" but then BAM! "Mom" it was so Sora like.

Date: 2005-03-25 07:40 pm (UTC)

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