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Challenge: [082] Crossroads
Title: Rubicon
Word Count: 387
Warnings: Spoilers for the near-end of KH2, regarding Axel. Waaaangst. Gratuitous italics.
Notes: HOGOD, you guys are so awesome. ♥♥♥

This was written while under the influence of Apoptygma Berserk (with special regards to Unicorn).


rubicon
(when the time comes, I'll give you my life, anything.)



You knew it was over the moment you saw him, didn't you? Summer-sky eyes and a heart that sang so sweetly to the part of you that you thought maybe wasn't so lost after all and you knew -- you knew -- that you were undone.

And you wondered (for just a moment) if you couldn't have changed things, couldn't have kept him close to you and out of this boy who is him but not and avoided this entire mess in the first place. Did you not reach far enough the first time he walked away? Did you think you could stop him? This time, you knew you wouldn't make the same mistake. It was the defining moment of your not-life, and you did not hesitate.

Who did you dance with then, two bodies spinning and twisting and diving in that brilliant swirl of blood-fire and violence? When you glanced his way, was it a trick of the light the way his image wavered for those few precious seconds and you saw a splash of golden hair and defiant eyes behind a curtain of shattering duskflesh?

Maybe. (But you knew better, and your chest heaved and clenched so tightly you thought you'd die. No, not yet, not yet!)

When you called the fire from the empty space within you, it was his Memory that fueled the flames that burst like justice from your mouth, his Name that burned away anything that might try to contain him.

And you were pleased with the outcome, even as you collapsed all crushed and broken and empty to the passage floor. You savored the way that even without your fire, warmth spread from your center, rippling outwards with increasing intensity and you thought you might be consumed again. You marveled at how much lighter you felt as the darkness began to fade, and you thought it was a good way to go, far better than death at the end of the keyblade -- death at his hands.



For the first time in as long as you could remember, you almost felt complete. Almost.

Perhaps your own heart was out of reach, but you thought that if maybe he could find it in himself to make a small spot for you in his, the end might not be so terrible after all.

-fin
8.11.06
word count: 387

I think the end is really awkward. Thoughts? (I really honestly do appreciate c&c.) I fought with it off-and-on for about five hours, and finally it and I reached a bit of a compromise. So. Now that I've finished, I'm going to reward myself with a night of FFXII and a little bit of the new Neil Gaiman I've been staying away from for the last several hours.

And then, maybe that second plot-bunny that erupted shortly after I started this.

Thank you for reading! ♥

Date: 2006-11-08 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] invisibledancer.livejournal.com
*tear*
very nice.

PS. I can't stop playing that game. its so good.

Date: 2006-11-08 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] invisibledancer.livejournal.com
haha! I was but I felt the same way about KH2. and sadly my DS is also left untouched while my WoW account is eating up money b/c I havent' played that either. damn you PS2!

Date: 2006-11-08 03:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-got-spunk.livejournal.com
Axel-death-scenes always hit me hard, and this one was especially beautiful. Reminds me of the first drabble I ever entered into a contest here. The ending is a great idea, but I had to read the sentence twice to really understand what you meant.

Who did you dance with then, two bodies spinning and twisting and diving in that brilliant swirl of blood-fire and violence? <-- That was my favourite line, especially the term blood-fire. Brilliant.

Date: 2006-11-08 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-got-spunk.livejournal.com
[link] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/356561.html)

Read all of them? That may take you a few weeks XD

Date: 2006-11-09 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-got-spunk.livejournal.com
aw, thanks!

*waves favourite one*

Date: 2006-11-10 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com
It's not awkward, it's a little disjointed at times BUT that works, because it takes place in a crazy hectic battle, ya know? Second person prose is tricky to write without it being jarring to the reader, but this flows very nicely here, and I heart second-person done well, so SQUEE.

When you glanced his way, was it a trick of the light the way his image wavered for those few precious seconds and you saw a spash of golden hair and defiant eyes behind a curtain of shattering duskflesh? yesyesyes! Lovely and brilliant and very kind to the Axel/Roxas readers out there. :) (Though I think you may have meant 'splash' instead of 'spash'?)

new Gaiman?! Whaaaat? *covets*

Date: 2007-11-30 10:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ronsard.livejournal.com
BABY. I am so late, you recced this to me so long ago, but this is just me saying that I love it (and by extension, you) to death. You fucking broke me, cruel wench.

Also, were you channeling Aimee Mann's High On Sunday 51 by any chance when you wrote this? Because it fits like a pair of shrunken hotpants:

We have crossed that rubicon
Ship awash, our rudder gone
The rats have fled but I'm hanging on
Let me try, oh baby, try.


In short: ♥

Date: 2007-12-01 03:35 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
THIS IS MY GOOFY GOOFUS GRIN IT WILL NOT STOP OH GOD. (I broke you out of love.)

I have never heard Aimee Mann, but after reading that tidbit, I really think I should. What I was channeling, in truth, was:

The paths that I once tread
have all but gone.
Only embers now smolder
where bridges once burned.
I feel alive and yet I fear
what may happen now.
I know I can't return.

And I hear me say again
'oh let me not return'.
Damn the illusion of redemption
and the hopes that held me here.
I will oppose all that would befall me.
With this rage inside of me
I will defy what I would become.


ILU2BB. ♥

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