Normally, the lack of capitalization probably would have had my inner english-elitist spasm in agony, but it just seems so right here. That was very clever of you.
Also, I found it really... hmn, how to phrase it. Just, your word choice, and the way you strung them together, I guess, just made it really powerful.
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Date: 2006-11-22 01:57 am (UTC)Also, I found it really... hmn, how to phrase it. Just, your word choice, and the way you strung them together, I guess, just made it really powerful.
Hearts for you~