As to your questions, I hadn't thought about the campfire until I started working on the next part. I'll be sure to work it in in the finished version.
As for their introduction, I'm somewhat inspired by Terry Pratchet's way of introducing characters. He first goes and describes them a bit before revealing them. Usually, he then goes off with their name if they're familiar enough to the reader. But I see what you mean; I'll fix it in a moment.
With Xyogof (which to me sounds Russian, like Xshyo-Gophf), I'm going on the idea that Nobodies are slightly different from their original selves; just look at Sora and Roxas. With his case, this would include different ways of speaking, different way of presenting himself, even a change of appearance (in more ways than one). (This is also apparent in the fact that, in the revision, he'll be eating his "steak" raw.)
As for the story itself, I'm thinking more an actual fanfiction than a series of drabbles, although each section could be put up as one.
Thank you for the reviews; I'll be sure to include the suggestions. Do you by chance have any IM handle?
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Date: 2006-12-22 02:54 am (UTC)As for their introduction, I'm somewhat inspired by Terry Pratchet's way of introducing characters. He first goes and describes them a bit before revealing them. Usually, he then goes off with their name if they're familiar enough to the reader. But I see what you mean; I'll fix it in a moment.
With Xyogof (which to me sounds Russian, like Xshyo-Gophf), I'm going on the idea that Nobodies are slightly different from their original selves; just look at Sora and Roxas. With his case, this would include different ways of speaking, different way of presenting himself, even a change of appearance (in more ways than one). (This is also apparent in the fact that, in the revision, he'll be eating his "steak" raw.)
As for the story itself, I'm thinking more an actual fanfiction than a series of drabbles, although each section could be put up as one.
Thank you for the reviews; I'll be sure to include the suggestions. Do you by chance have any IM handle?