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kh_drabble... something I swore I'd never write.. something I have no idea how this will end; but it hit me in the head like a three hundred pound heffalump.... get my drift?
Challenge: Ever After (second entry)
Title: Finale
word count: 405
Something was missing; something was slightly off and none of them could truly figure out what it was.
Rabbit's garden was in its place, all his vegetables lined in precise and perfect rows, so that wasn't where the missing thing was.
All of Gopher's many tunnesl were winding throughout the Hundred Acre Woods, they knew because he had checked several times a day, so once again that wasn't it.
Piglet's too large house was where it was meant to be, as was Eeyore's, though that wasn't saying much.
Owl sat on his porch every day; Tigger's destructive paths were just as they had left them..
Yes, the Hunny treee was buzzing with life and hunny.
So what was it, Pooh thought, that was missing.
"Maybe," he finally decided with a few thoughtful thunks to his fluff stuffed head, "it's not something we can really see."
Maybe, he continued on silently, it's something we're feeling. We're missing the visits from Sora, yes that was it. Because he had such a nice smile. So much like...
The bear paused for a moment. Sora had a smile like him how could Pooh forget him?
He jumped from his thinking spot, running as fast as his legs would carry. "Christopher Robin!" he called.
Pooh Bear passed by Rabbit who was gardening with a thoughtful look (he too realized something was missing) and it was only after Pooh was pass did it hit Rabbit too.
"Christopher Robin!" They called in unison.
Soon all their friends had joined them, they were all running to the same place, the place where he should be.
And there he sat, on his swing, kicking his legs back and forth to reach a higher altitude.
He stopped as the parade of animals came into view. "Pooh Bear, is something wrong?" asked Christopher Robin, squatting next to his friends.
Pooh Bear was taking long deep breaths. "You were gone Christopher Robin." he stated matter-of-factly. "And we forgot that you were here. But now we remember and you are back."
The bear leaned in, wrapping his not-quite-there paws around the boy. "And it's okay now."
Christopher Robin laughed, encircling all his friends in a hug. "Silly old bear, of course I'm back. I was home sick!"
Relief filled the small group, everything was as it should be.
"Excuse me, um... Mr. Narrator."
Yes Pooh?
"Can we please say 'The End' now?"
Why of course Pooh.
The End.
Yea, I know... this was.. super weird....
Challenge: Ever After (second entry)
Title: Finale
word count: 405
Something was missing; something was slightly off and none of them could truly figure out what it was.
Rabbit's garden was in its place, all his vegetables lined in precise and perfect rows, so that wasn't where the missing thing was.
All of Gopher's many tunnesl were winding throughout the Hundred Acre Woods, they knew because he had checked several times a day, so once again that wasn't it.
Piglet's too large house was where it was meant to be, as was Eeyore's, though that wasn't saying much.
Owl sat on his porch every day; Tigger's destructive paths were just as they had left them..
Yes, the Hunny treee was buzzing with life and hunny.
So what was it, Pooh thought, that was missing.
"Maybe," he finally decided with a few thoughtful thunks to his fluff stuffed head, "it's not something we can really see."
Maybe, he continued on silently, it's something we're feeling. We're missing the visits from Sora, yes that was it. Because he had such a nice smile. So much like...
The bear paused for a moment. Sora had a smile like him how could Pooh forget him?
He jumped from his thinking spot, running as fast as his legs would carry. "Christopher Robin!" he called.
Pooh Bear passed by Rabbit who was gardening with a thoughtful look (he too realized something was missing) and it was only after Pooh was pass did it hit Rabbit too.
"Christopher Robin!" They called in unison.
Soon all their friends had joined them, they were all running to the same place, the place where he should be.
And there he sat, on his swing, kicking his legs back and forth to reach a higher altitude.
He stopped as the parade of animals came into view. "Pooh Bear, is something wrong?" asked Christopher Robin, squatting next to his friends.
Pooh Bear was taking long deep breaths. "You were gone Christopher Robin." he stated matter-of-factly. "And we forgot that you were here. But now we remember and you are back."
The bear leaned in, wrapping his not-quite-there paws around the boy. "And it's okay now."
Christopher Robin laughed, encircling all his friends in a hug. "Silly old bear, of course I'm back. I was home sick!"
Relief filled the small group, everything was as it should be.
"Excuse me, um... Mr. Narrator."
Yes Pooh?
"Can we please say 'The End' now?"
Why of course Pooh.
The End.
Yea, I know... this was.. super weird....
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Date: 2005-01-30 11:07 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-01-30 12:03 pm (UTC)That plus my mom's several thousand mini shrines to him around our house *dies*
I'm glad people find it... enjoyable xDDD
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Date: 2005-01-30 03:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-01-30 05:12 pm (UTC)five different pooh styled blankets. a pooh toilet seat cover etc etc.
our house is full of pooh xDD
Me? I heart Eeyore myself.
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Date: 2005-03-25 07:17 pm (UTC)This is the first time I've seen a KH drabble in the Hundred Acre Wood. Good job!