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Challenge: [177] Pretty Lies
Title: Which Way
Wordcount: 562
Notes: During KHII, Sora looks for Riku in every world he visits.


The cat’s grin suggests that this is not the first time it’s been greeted with: “Oh. It’s you.”

“If I am ‘you’ (which I’m not) than you can’t be ‘you’. So. What are not-you, then?”

Sora wants to close his eyes, take a deep breath, but if he even blinks the cat may disappear. It likes to do that. “I don’t have time for this, I’m looking-”

“Of course not-you don’t. The white rabbit does. But he’s running late, I’m afraid, and I’m sorry to say his speed is better described as a stroll than a run, if not-you know what I mean.”

“I’m looking” Sora continues, ignoring the grin that would be splitting skin on anyone else’s face, “for my friend. I think. I saw him run this way... Tall, black coat. I know it’s Riku.”

“Ye-ees?”

“Well.” Hopeless shrug, sighing. He gestures to the fork in the road, where the one path suddenly becomes two. “Which way did he go?”

(Because there is never ever just one way to go in this world. And if there were, it wouldn’t be the way you meant to go anyway.)

“I know the last thing that went down each path. So not-your friend went either this way or this way,” the cat helpfully replies. Sora takes another large breath. He does not contemplate the logistics of knocking a feline from a tree with firaga. Honest.

“Which one was it?” Each word bitten out around the desperation that he was going to lose Riku. Again.

“Well, I’m not quite sure.”

“You said you knew!” As if stressing poor logic would make anyone in this world see reason.

“I said that I know the last thing that went down each path. Shall I tell not-you?” Jaw tight, Sora just nods, and the grin curls up, up, and up like a crescent moon. If the cat widened it any further the two ends might meet. It still manages to talk through the grin; “Down this path,” it points to the left, “ran a pretty lie, and down that path ran an ugly truth.”

“What?”

Grin, grin, grin, tail swishing in amusement.

The two paths look identical. He glares up at the cat. His eyes plead up at the cat. He almost hops from foot to foot in indecision and desperate frustration, but he’s nearly sixteen now so instead just lets a very unmanly whine escape his throat.

“Choose, choose, choose,” the cat chants, voice dipped disgusting in amusement. “Take not-your time, it’s all like a circle, like a sun, like a pie. Blueberry pie. If not-you choose the correct path, not-you will find him. He’s waiting. He wants to get caught. With his hand in the cookie jar. Tsk tsk.”

“He’s always running away. I need to hurry. Can’t you just-”

“If not-you choose the correct path, not-you will find him,” it repeats, but it’s quiet now. The cat’s bored. It’s fading. Sora doesn’t try to stop it, just watches until even the white teeth disappear.

He only despairs for a moment when he realises that, somehow, Kairi would have known whether Riku was a pretty lie or an ugly truth. But Kairi was safe back on the islands, waiting.

Sora takes one quick look between the two directions and then tears down the path on the left. He does not find Riku in Wonderland.

Date: 2009-02-22 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepichef.livejournal.com
So, this was so good it got me to de-lurk. I adore anyone who can write Wonderland properly, for one thing. Also, I really like your take on the prompt, since I didn't see it coming until I read the line. <3

Date: 2009-02-22 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spoke.livejournal.com
Ouch! Oh, Sora, wrong choice. This, things like this, are why he should have taken her with him when she asked. x.x

Very fun to read, I could feel Sora's frustration there. Made my skin itch.

Date: 2009-02-22 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hotasphyxiation.livejournal.com
Oh wow. I love you? Haha, suchhhhhh a fantastic idea for the prompt, here, and the way you executed it? Amazing. Wonderland (and the Cheshire Cat, for that matter) is just awesome/insanely tricky to write, and you did it wonderfully. :P

The last line's a stinger. I just love this.

Date: 2009-02-22 06:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oreo-81369-17.livejournal.com
ooo i love the last little bit~ poor Sora haha

Date: 2009-02-22 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demishock.livejournal.com
I had to de-lurk just to inform you that this is utterly amazing and I think I might weep from joy.

Date: 2009-02-24 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarechan.livejournal.com
You're really inspiring and have another de-lurker here. :3 I wanted to compliment you on the beauty of your words and how everything could play out differently, and how bittersweet this felt. I love this so very much!

Date: 2009-03-09 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kunoichi-life.livejournal.com
Aughuhhh... *brain melts*

The concept is brilliant and the execution is to die for. Pretty lies vs Ugly truth can refer to anything from Sora's perception of Riku, of what Sora WANTS Riku to be, the result of choosing right or wrong- it can mean anything.

Then, in all this confusion... everything ends with a perfect stab to the heart. Daw. Poor Sora.

God, Tabitha, i would have your babies were it not anatomically impossible.

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