Challenge [196]

[aurons-fan.livejournal.com]

Challenge: [196] Fifty Words
Title: Ignorance
Word Count: 50
Notes: I rewrote this prompt at least ten times. Finally I have something. Thanks Riku. :D

When Riku stared out at the ocean from their tiny island, he craved adventure from every pore. He didn’t care what, just something to save him from the safe restraints known as life.

Now a prisoner in his own body, he watched the world, wishing he hadn’t been so naïve.
 

Comments

[punjab-banks.livejournal.com]

ah i loved this scene in the game - riku/ansem was so creepy, standing there, lol...anyway, this drabble is such a perfect summary of how riku could have been feeling then. i really like it :)

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

Now a prisoner in his own body, he watched the world, wishing he hadn’t been so naïve.

Ohhhh, Riku... =[ Sad as this may be, it's absolutely lovely.