Challenge [196]: 50 Words

[killer-rip.livejournal.com]

Challenge [196]: 50 Words
Title: Flames
Word Count: 50
Spoilers: None so far as I can tell ‘cept for Auron.
Notes: Hi Hades, hi Auron

His hands swirl the shrieking dead in their swamp. Shark teeth clash in frustration and flaming hair sparks bright red.

The deceased screech their regret and his servant, a bought soul, waits for orders while the child of light wanders in the land of the departed, looking for a heart.

Comments

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

I like this a lot! Chilling, and the last line is absolutely wonderful!

[killer-rip.livejournal.com]

Thank you!~ You have no idea how many times this was rewritten. XDD

[singwithin.livejournal.com]

Your first sentence totally gave me the chills. Such a good line! And kudos for writing about Hades and Auron, both of whom don't get all that much attention. :)

[killer-rip.livejournal.com]

Thanks!~ I love Hades and Auron. Hades has been torturing me a while now for a story. And it's bad when you disappoint Hades. XD