[identity profile] nirvana-falling.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kh_drabble
challenge: [196] 50 words
wordcount: 50 exactly
title: monsters
notes: :/



On Tortuga Sora saw dead men alive, skeletons with will and intent, shells without taste that ate insatiably, beasts without hearts that wanted fiercely.

Back home, he saw in Riku’s eyes a living boy dead, a beating heart that refused to be any more.

Only one still haunts his dreams.

Date: 2009-08-10 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thekeyisgone.livejournal.com
oh wow, this was beautiful.

Date: 2009-08-10 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] syn-or-fantasy.livejournal.com
This really was an amazing read. I wish that I could be as talented to be able to capture so much with so little.

Date: 2009-08-11 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greedchan.livejournal.com
;____;
Oh, wow.

Date: 2009-08-13 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] singwithin.livejournal.com
Eeeeeks, the contrast here makes this all the more memorable and spooky and really, really powerful. That last line made me go ;____;!!! Very nice job.

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