Challenge 202
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kh_drabbleChallenge: 202 - Smile
Title: The Sun And Moon
Word Count: 90
Notes: Nothing I can think of.
In their smiles, she sees the sun and the moon.
Sora is bright and shining, and every time she looks at it she feels the same warmth she does every day they hang out on the beach.
Riku is bright light against a blue-black sky, beautiful. His smile has phases- she sees them, as memories rise and fall.
But when they're together, she sees a circle. She sees the sunrise and sunset, and sometimes, if she looks close enough, she can see the faint moon guarding the sun in daylight.
Title: The Sun And Moon
Word Count: 90
Notes: Nothing I can think of.
In their smiles, she sees the sun and the moon.
Sora is bright and shining, and every time she looks at it she feels the same warmth she does every day they hang out on the beach.
Riku is bright light against a blue-black sky, beautiful. His smile has phases- she sees them, as memories rise and fall.
But when they're together, she sees a circle. She sees the sunrise and sunset, and sometimes, if she looks close enough, she can see the faint moon guarding the sun in daylight.
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Date: 2009-09-28 12:07 am (UTC)I love you for this. Like. rilly. So powerful for only 90 words.
His smile has phases- she sees them, as memories rise and fall. that line (actually, all of it, but still) is made of love.
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Date: 2009-09-28 01:52 am (UTC)