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kh_drabbleTitle: Storytelling 101
Words: 225
Challenge: [206 storm]
Summary: Fairly self-explanatory. Title subject to change.
Once upon a time, someone opened a door and all the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and they picked up two boys and a girl and carried them far from home.
Wait, no. Once upon a time, a boy opened a door and all the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and the darkness in the storm stole two boys and a girl and carried them where they needed to be.
Still, that’s not quite right. Let’s try again. Once upon a time, a boy opened a door, not on purpose but because he yearned for open doors, and all of the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and they brought the darkness and storm, and so they took two boys and a girl and brought them to where they were supposed to be.
Almost. We’re so close. Once upon a time, a boy opened a door, not on purpose but because he yearned for open doors, and all the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and they brought the darkness and storm, and so they brought a princess to her kingdom, a hero to his battlefield, and a tragic hero to his downfall.
One last try. Once upon a time, a storm came into a boy’s heart, and he let it through the door.
That’s it?
Yes. That’s it.
Words: 225
Challenge: [206 storm]
Summary: Fairly self-explanatory. Title subject to change.
Once upon a time, someone opened a door and all the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and they picked up two boys and a girl and carried them far from home.
Wait, no. Once upon a time, a boy opened a door and all the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and the darkness in the storm stole two boys and a girl and carried them where they needed to be.
Still, that’s not quite right. Let’s try again. Once upon a time, a boy opened a door, not on purpose but because he yearned for open doors, and all of the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and they brought the darkness and storm, and so they took two boys and a girl and brought them to where they were supposed to be.
Almost. We’re so close. Once upon a time, a boy opened a door, not on purpose but because he yearned for open doors, and all the winds of all the worlds rushed through, and they brought the darkness and storm, and so they brought a princess to her kingdom, a hero to his battlefield, and a tragic hero to his downfall.
One last try. Once upon a time, a storm came into a boy’s heart, and he let it through the door.
That’s it?
Yes. That’s it.
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Date: 2009-11-11 12:39 am (UTC)that is all.
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Date: 2009-11-11 01:12 am (UTC)Anyway, awesome idea for a drabble, I really like the way it's set up. Squee.
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