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kh_drabble Challenge: Begin at the end {215}
Title: Second chances
Word count: 347
Notes: Utter lack of subtlety is lacking. Wasn't going to enter one of my :waves newbie flag: pieces, but the Haiti thing was kinda motivating.
I think this one is rather sucky, especially because it was a product of my dodging dialogue practice. x_x;
FOREWARNING: THIS HAS MODERATE TO HIGH SPOILERS FOR BIRTH BY SLEEP ESPECIALLY LAST EPISODE, TERRA'S ENDING, VEN'S ENDING
AGAIN WARNING
Ok, you have been warned. >_> <_<
Edit: EFF I have no idea what I did to it to give it 2 lj cuts @_@ But please click on the first...It has the additional warning...
SECOND TIME REWARNING. THIS CONTAINS BBS SPOILERS, ESPECIALLY FOR THE ENDINGS. DO NOT READ IF YOU DO NOT WISH TO HAVE SPOILERS
THIRD TIME WARNING(is this enough warnings >_>;)
He wasn't supposed to exist.
After the last battle with Aqua, in a final, desperate moment of clarity, Terra had taken the hulking keyblade to their collective hearts and plunged blissfully into darkness. His last thought was of Aqua, how beautifully radiant she was, how well she would carry on their Master's legacy.
And how it would be all the much easier for her without his poisonous heart clouding her world like acid.
He wasn't supposed to exist, yet here he was, placidly sitting on a couch and looking into a pair of adamant blue eyes. At the least, he thought, those eyes should be clouded with pain; turned away in mistrust. He'd killed their teacher, worse, he'd as good as killed the both of them.
Yet, inexplicably, Aqua leveled a patient gaze at him, eyes shining with hope and happiness. Belatedly, he slowly reached a hand out towards her, but recoiled, as the blue haired girl flinched under his impending touch.
Memories of a darker time, after the possession. Brutal strength. A cold, sneering voice. Hands callously wrapped around a slender neck, intent on...Light, he had harmed her! No matter the sacrifice, he swore at least to protect his friends.
One more reason Sora should have left him in the darkness.
Aqua, however, seemed to think nothing of it. Amidst his self incrimination, Terra suddenly felt a pair of hands brush his arms, hesitantly at first, and then forcefully, as he was wrapped in her embrace; a silky blue head nuzzled into his chest. Slowly, he returned the gesture, aching to touch her yet fearing to break her. At first, she'd tensed, but as the seconds passed, the girl had relaxed, and he'd allowed himself to cling to her, immersed in her calming light.
Their story was to have ended more than a decade ago, each one broken by the plan Master Xehanort had set into motion. Now, with his princess tucked in his arms and his little brother's heart restored and whole, Terra felt that their finale could have a new beginning.
A/N: Gawd I'm dodging writing Ven like crazy. I try and try, and the Ven muse doesn't speak to me. Oh wait, none of them speaks to me, since none of them have dialogue. @_@
Title: Second chances
Word count: 347
Notes: Utter lack of subtlety is lacking. Wasn't going to enter one of my :waves newbie flag: pieces, but the Haiti thing was kinda motivating.
I think this one is rather sucky, especially because it was a product of my dodging dialogue practice. x_x;
FOREWARNING: THIS HAS MODERATE TO HIGH SPOILERS FOR BIRTH BY SLEEP ESPECIALLY LAST EPISODE, TERRA'S ENDING, VEN'S ENDING
AGAIN WARNING
Ok, you have been warned. >_> <_<
Edit: EFF I have no idea what I did to it to give it 2 lj cuts @_@ But please click on the first...It has the additional warning...
SECOND TIME REWARNING. THIS CONTAINS BBS SPOILERS, ESPECIALLY FOR THE ENDINGS. DO NOT READ IF YOU DO NOT WISH TO HAVE SPOILERS
THIRD TIME WARNING(is this enough warnings >_>;)
He wasn't supposed to exist.
After the last battle with Aqua, in a final, desperate moment of clarity, Terra had taken the hulking keyblade to their collective hearts and plunged blissfully into darkness. His last thought was of Aqua, how beautifully radiant she was, how well she would carry on their Master's legacy.
And how it would be all the much easier for her without his poisonous heart clouding her world like acid.
He wasn't supposed to exist, yet here he was, placidly sitting on a couch and looking into a pair of adamant blue eyes. At the least, he thought, those eyes should be clouded with pain; turned away in mistrust. He'd killed their teacher, worse, he'd as good as killed the both of them.
Yet, inexplicably, Aqua leveled a patient gaze at him, eyes shining with hope and happiness. Belatedly, he slowly reached a hand out towards her, but recoiled, as the blue haired girl flinched under his impending touch.
Memories of a darker time, after the possession. Brutal strength. A cold, sneering voice. Hands callously wrapped around a slender neck, intent on...Light, he had harmed her! No matter the sacrifice, he swore at least to protect his friends.
One more reason Sora should have left him in the darkness.
Aqua, however, seemed to think nothing of it. Amidst his self incrimination, Terra suddenly felt a pair of hands brush his arms, hesitantly at first, and then forcefully, as he was wrapped in her embrace; a silky blue head nuzzled into his chest. Slowly, he returned the gesture, aching to touch her yet fearing to break her. At first, she'd tensed, but as the seconds passed, the girl had relaxed, and he'd allowed himself to cling to her, immersed in her calming light.
Their story was to have ended more than a decade ago, each one broken by the plan Master Xehanort had set into motion. Now, with his princess tucked in his arms and his little brother's heart restored and whole, Terra felt that their finale could have a new beginning.
A/N: Gawd I'm dodging writing Ven like crazy. I try and try, and the Ven muse doesn't speak to me. Oh wait, none of them speaks to me, since none of them have dialogue. @_@
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Date: 2010-01-25 07:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-25 10:59 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-25 07:37 pm (UTC)But really, great piece :3 thank you for sharing
oh no, I do not need another OTP but here we gono subject
Date: 2010-01-25 10:58 pm (UTC):Is completely innocent: 0:-)
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Date: 2010-01-31 09:07 am (UTC)I'm liking this new beginning for Terra. He really needs a break, the poor fellow. Lovely job! :)!