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Title: swallowed
Challenge [215]: Begin at the End
Word Count: 175
Notes: Roxas comes home (twice). SO GIMMICKY.
He is swallowed by light.
On that shore he opens his eyes and finds himself at a place his soul calls home.
This is Sora, he knows, this is Sora’s heart, its deep, secret chambers. This is the heart that he has sought for all his life.
He’s lucky. The rest of them, those other desperate seekers, they don’t have this. Vexen’s science lead nowhere, Lexaeus’ philosophy to nothing, Larxene’s fury to the void. Xemnas watched as he was robbed of his dream. Axel is dead is gone is dead is Axel. Xemnas watched as he was robbed of his dream. Vexen’s science lead nowhere, Lexaeus’ philosophy to nothing, Larxene’s fury to the void. The rest of them, those other desperate seekers, they don’t have this. He’s lucky.
This is the heart that he has sought for all his life. This is Sora, he knows, this is Sora’s heart, its deep, secret chambers.
On that shore he opens his eyes and finds himself at a place his soul calls home.
He is swallowed by light.
Challenge [215]: Begin at the End
Word Count: 175
Notes: Roxas comes home (twice). SO GIMMICKY.
He is swallowed by light.
On that shore he opens his eyes and finds himself at a place his soul calls home.
This is Sora, he knows, this is Sora’s heart, its deep, secret chambers. This is the heart that he has sought for all his life.
He’s lucky. The rest of them, those other desperate seekers, they don’t have this. Vexen’s science lead nowhere, Lexaeus’ philosophy to nothing, Larxene’s fury to the void. Xemnas watched as he was robbed of his dream. Axel is dead is gone is dead is Axel. Xemnas watched as he was robbed of his dream. Vexen’s science lead nowhere, Lexaeus’ philosophy to nothing, Larxene’s fury to the void. The rest of them, those other desperate seekers, they don’t have this. He’s lucky.
This is the heart that he has sought for all his life. This is Sora, he knows, this is Sora’s heart, its deep, secret chambers.
On that shore he opens his eyes and finds himself at a place his soul calls home.
He is swallowed by light.
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Date: 2010-01-26 07:56 pm (UTC)I didn't cry right there I don't know what you're implyingI love how this repeats on it's self. Right there in the middle was all kinds of sad and then by the end, well I felt kinda fuzzy in that warm happy way.
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Date: 2010-01-27 07:10 am (UTC)Thanks!
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Date: 2010-01-26 11:19 pm (UTC)You have killed me ded with the awsome that is this drabble.
*adds to mems*
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Date: 2010-01-27 07:12 am (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2010-01-27 12:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-27 07:14 am (UTC)I was worried the layout would seem trite, but I'm glad it didn't
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Date: 2010-01-31 10:37 am (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2010-01-31 09:29 am (UTC)And I when I read the end, it felt different from the first time because of what I read in the middle. And now I'm rambling.
SO NICE. :D
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Date: 2010-01-31 10:39 am (UTC)Yay, I'm so glad it worked!
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