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Challenge: [215] Begin at the End
Title: Ouroboros.
Word Count: 130.
Spoilers: Blink-and-you'll-miss-it for Days.
Characters: Aqua, Terra, and Ven; Xion, Axel, and Roxas; Kairi, Riku, and Sora.
Summary: On and on the story goes, but it keeps coming back to the same place.


Two boys and a girl watched the sun go down over a dreaming sea. She smiled like the lapping of waves against the dock, he laughed like deep bells ringing, he looked into the sunset unblinking.

Two boys who are not and a girl who is even less watch the eternal twilight on the deep blue sea. She smiles like stained glass breaking, he laughs like a battle banner, he looks out into forever as though he can see through the world to the answers beneath.

Two boys and a girl will watch the sun go down over their familiar sea. She will smile like opening flowers on a spring morning, he will laugh like a trumpet fanfare, he will look at the horizon once again for the first time.

Comments

[synchroshatter.livejournal.com]

I think this is really beautiful, especially the line She smiles like stained glass breaking. And it works all the better for being so short.

[lettersandliars.livejournal.com]

he will look at the horizon once again for the first time.

Ouch, and at the same time, wow. Love the parallels, and the second paragraph is particularly lovely.

[roterstern.livejournal.com]

Oh my god. This is so gorgeous.

[roterstern.livejournal.com]

'Memming this. I've just had the same thoughts, On and on the story goes, but it keeps coming back to the same place and it hurts so lovely.

[kagome-angel.livejournal.com]

This is a beautiful sort of pain. Definitely going in my memories. I love it. Thank you for sharing. <33333

[zanypomegranate.livejournal.com]

he will look at the horizon once again for the first time. :)!!!!!!!
I loved the ending so much and it was expectional. Really. :)