[identity profile] syvia.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kh_drabble
Title: Cradle
Word Count: 273
Spoilers: none
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for srs angst
Notes: I'm feeling inspired. :D Some not-really SaiKai, timeframe during KHII with extremely mild BBS spoilers and my own cracky 'hey, what if?' ideas.



She remembers red hair, and blue hair, and having two babysitters because one of them was kind, and did favors for her grandmother. 
    
The other one was bored.
    
But she doesn't realize. 
    
Once, twice, and the third with strings over long fingers and collapsing the cat's cradle over her small wrist, gently, gently.  She laughed.  He smiled. 
    
His friend would suggest ice cream.  She would beg him until he sighed, and admonished the boy with the flame-bright hair, and said she mustn't tell her grandmother.
    
Who never minded. 
    
She remembers, but she doesn't realize.  Because black coats and empty chests are her enemies and it's been nine years.  Nine years and he was just the friend, bright hair or no.
    
She doesn't realize because their faces are different, and their voices are different, and for some reason she could never remember, she's always, always loved Riku's eyes.
    
His hood is up when she's stolen from Axel, but there is something about the way they speak to each other....
    
She's only known one person with hair like that.
    
... She thinks.
    
The hood is down as he drags her through white halls, one hand on her wrist- blue thread, not black.  It used to be blue.

"Isa."  It's a breath.  A whisper.
    
He hears it anyway. 

There is gold in her vision, gold and that horrible scar and soft, sky blue she can remember carding through her fingers- riding high atop his shoulders.  Gold like the crescent moon on his jacket and the cradle is around her jaw, hurting- bruising.
    
"No," he says, and it's a purr that begins the roar, "I am not."

Date: 2010-09-24 02:52 am (UTC)
ext_218012: (Sora// heartbeatflickerflickerflicker)
From: [identity profile] iki-teru.livejournal.com
YOU. BREAK MY FANGIRLY HEART IN THE BEST WAY AND GOD I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY BECAUSE I'M TOO BUSY MAKING RIDICULOUS SQUEAKY NOISES OF GLEE AND SADNESS OVER HERE SO ALL YOU GET IS CAPSLOCK RIDICULOUSNESS (and ILU ♥)

Date: 2010-09-24 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mishiru-shi.livejournal.com
;_; you write just so well....
I love how you did this one
really love it

Date: 2010-09-24 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lazzchan.livejournal.com
Hee, I'm writing something along similar lines for [livejournal.com profile] crimsoncookie because it just CALLS for it. Lovely lovely, I love you and this. :D

Date: 2010-09-24 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com
GLEEE! <3<3<3 I am mush for young Kairi.

Date: 2010-09-25 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kawaiigami.livejournal.com
Oh. Oh my. ♥

In other words, this is awesome and you should be proud of it. Yes.

Date: 2010-09-25 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spoke.livejournal.com
Yay for being inspired! \o/

Also. Meeeep. That is a lovely mix of scariness from Saix and just awwwww at the image of tiny Kairi trailing along after Isa.

And Lea would be bored, little pain. What is this nonsense with his bff not paying attention to him!

But Saix. o.o

Date: 2010-09-28 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roterstern.livejournal.com
Oh my god, this is awesome and wicked. Oh yes.

Date: 2010-09-28 12:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer1789.livejournal.com
Another crisp combo of sweet/sad. I really like how you hint at these moments in terms of description, leave the very fine detail for the reader to sketch out - it gives it that memory-vagueness, imo. ^^

Date: 2010-09-29 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimsoncookie.livejournal.com
:3 eeee, yay. ♥ flurry of syvvie posts!

this is ... eee. ♥ the image of the cat's cradle is just... just. and the last line is heartwrenching. :x

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