Whoa. This is like... so gorgeous. I like all the metaphors--I think they fit with the style you wrote this in. The imagery you evoke with this is just... gahhhh. :D
I'm not that great with characterizations of Xion (never actually PLAYED Days, just did a read-through of the script), but this feels right, and I like how you had her contrast herself with the other girls. Love the way you depicted them.
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Date: 2011-01-06 07:44 am (UTC)I'm not that great with characterizations of Xion (never actually PLAYED Days, just did a read-through of the script), but this feels right, and I like how you had her contrast herself with the other girls. Love the way you depicted them.
And Olette...! <3