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[musiq-mistress.livejournal.com]

Challenge - Secrets
Title - Secret Place
Word Count - 115
Footnote - Umm... for the lack of entries? XD;

The Secret Place possesses a mysterious aura. The presence of something alive has always been felt present whether you looked at it; entered, or just stood near it-—it was vibrant with something. A something that if you took a whiff or taste of it, you're addicted like a leech to blood; peanut butter to jelly; children to candy.

Selphie calls it “uber awesome charm”, “haunting of a deceased kid” Tidus believed, but Wakka logically debated it was “just your imagination”.

Nobody suspected the Secret Place to be home of their downfall to the darkness. Nobody knew it held more than just secrets in its wake.

Everybody thought the Secret Place was just another cave.

Comments

[uzumakisama.livejournal.com]

XD When I came up with the challenge, I hadn't even thought of the Secret Place. That fit really well, and it was a nice take on the challenge. Thanks for entering~

[musiq-mistress.livejournal.com]

Really? lol It was the first thing that came to mind what I read "Secrets". XD;;

Thanks for entering~

You're welcome. ^^

[gysecune.livejournal.com]

You capture the feeling of the Secret Place very well. *_* I really like this. Only suggestion for change - your addicted to "you're addicted."

[musiq-mistress.livejournal.com]

XD! Thanks. I was a bit worried I didn't do a good job... but then again, my self confidence has never been very high. >_>; Figures. Thanks for the suggestion! I shall edit immediately! D:

[evandura.livejournal.com]

'Wakka logically debated it was “just your imagination”.'

I loved that line!

[musiq-mistress.livejournal.com]

Hahaha, glad you liked! :]